Design Success and Failure in Relation to Syntactical Guidelines

DAI 323

Assignment 5

Design Success and Failure in Relation to Syntactical Guidelines

Successful

The design work presented above is a very good example of applied syntactical guidelines that have been put into good use for the product. The goal of the product is to communicate a soft smooth product line of hand soap, lotion, and anti bacterial mist. The product is communicating natural ingredients for the user. The way the message is been communicated is by using perception as the arrangement of the elements to deliver the message. For example the fonts are very simple and smooth looking. Also the shape of the bottles are formed with smooth curvy lines, along with the colors that have been chosen (soft earthy green, ocean blue, and a very soft flowerily orange). Three simple colors but they do work well with the smooth shape of the bottles which communicates natural and smooth ingredients for the user. Another syntactical guideline that has been put into good use is asymmetrical balance, leveling, and attraction. These guidelines are all working well with each other. The asymmetrical balance works well with the product’s logo since the leaf is big and bold enough to complement the capital “C” in the logo; therefore that creates balance. The leveling goes well with the composition since it has achieved balance by positioning the logo in the middle of the bottle plus the labeling with smaller soft color fonts in the middle as well, creates a total harmony, calming feeling in the product. The attraction guideline is present since we can experience a good interaction between all the elements of the design. This is a successful design, because it incorporates several of the syntactical guidelines that helps a product be successful if put in good use. Part of the success is the elements that are used plus the way they have been applied and complements each other and helps communicate the message to the user plus is very pleasant to the audience’s eye.

Failure

The design above is a good example of failure design. First of all the message is unclear, the packaging on the box mentions “Children of war gang violence….” and other writing that is not legible but is promoting purified water. The reason why is a failure is because the whole design in general do not have a good perception of the message the elements are opposites, is confusing, no balance on how they trying to sell purified water but the message of peace and hope and children of war does not have anything to do with the product. The design is not pleasant at all since the peace sign right on the edge of the box creates ambiguous sharpening tension in the design. Based on that the whole composition is disorganized and because of that it creates stress. The elements are all over there is a lot of disconnection in the design. There is no flow at all the eye is all over, the purpose and meaning of such design is a total failure because of all the decisions on how they gave a bad use to the syntactical guidelines. Besides that the big bulky fonts also do not work well at all for the design. Everything that has been laid out is making no sense and is working against the product; so that makes it a good failure desig.

Visual vs Symbolic Language

Ingrid Alfaro

DAI 323

Visual Language Syntax



Representational Content

-American Flag

-American Coins

Compositional Structure

-American flag as an arrow pointing down from the left corner as foreground focal point

-Ascending and descending lines forming pointy waves that travels through the picture from left to bottom right in an angle

-Pilled up American coins as background

-Saturated colors are used as well as transparency effect

Symbols

-Arrows pointing down

-Ascending and descending lines

Analysis

The photograph displays a bold arrow from the top left corner; which is pointing down and the tip reaches the bottom quarter portion before the end of the picture. The bold arrow is filled in with the American flag. Because of its solid bright colors, and strong structure of the arrow it becomes the foreground and the focal point in the picture. The arrow creates a rupture motion, or breaking through movement in the middle ground which would be the ascending and descending lines that forms a pattern of an upwards and downwards pointy wave. The ascending and descending lines that starts from the left vertical frame of the picture and travels in an angle in an up and down motion through the picture until reaching the bottom right corner of the picture frame. The color that has been used for the bottom portion that the lines have created is a light transparency of what the background is considered to be; which it happens to be a constructed pattern of pilled up American coins all over the picture positioned in an angle creating downward, falling motion. This pattern of pilled up coins it has a fading optical illusion which starts clear from the front of the middle portion of the picture and fades towards the back and pile of coins becomes blurry. That effect travels from middle left of the picture spreading upwards in an 180⁰ angle. Putting together all the described elements and structures it forms a representational image of the American economy status.   



Meaning 2

Ingrid Alfaro

DAI 323

MEANING 2

VISUAL COMMUNICATIONS

Representational

-         The design presented above is representing a green message. The message “the last tree gone” on the tree stump puts more feel into the design which clearly delivers the message of how companies are trying to go green and use less things that triggers our natural habitat.

-         The impact on the design towards the audience is to think about of the things we are using as resource in order to create and designing products that we need or want; therefore to try and seek for sources and material that are green and good for our planet.

-         Since this is the representational design of a green message for design purposes it has a very close connection with the following two levels of visual message which are symbolism and abstraction. From representing the message that is when the abstract part comes into play which will finally lead to the symbolization.

Abstraction

-         Here we have an abstract design which has a lot of potential in communicating the abstraction of a chopped off tree stump, from a bird’s eye view. The green color is very helpful in delivering an eco friendly tip or message.  

-         This design has a very green feeling because of the color that has bean applied; which helps incorporate the green message that is trying to come across the viewers. The black background also helps catch the viewer’s eye as well as the chosen position of the abstraction creates a single focal point that at the same time represents the “the last tree gone”.

-         This design would help shape up the next level (symbolization) of the visual message. Having the color and the abstract idea of the representational message, helps come up with the symbolization of the overall design and what is communicating.

Symbolic

-         This is a symbolization of green designs meaning that designs are made of eco friendly material and maybe recycle materials as well; which helps our environment and planet.

-         The symbol is the representation and abstraction of a message combined in order to deliver the message to the audience, of green production that is destroying our planet but get the way the G has been design reflects a recycling feeling as well. The impact of this symbolization toward the audience is clearly transmitting the message across; which that products and designs are made of eco friendly products. This is a very strong symbolization and maybe effective for clientele that do strongly care about making a difference in keeping our planet alive.

-         The way the symbolization relates to the representational and abstraction level is by applying and having the combination of the levels into one design. For example the green color was kept, not as bright but a little bit saturated which is more comfortable to the eye. The bird’s eye view of the chopped off tree was kept with a twitched to a G with an arrow; which such represents green recycle materials for design.

-         I really and strongly believe there is a connection in the three images provided, and proofs that the three levels of visual communication can be applied and combined into one design and at the same time deliver the message behind it.

Meaning 1

Representation

The image above is a representation of some of the type of architecture in the United States. The architecture’s style that was used to build the U. S capitol is Neoclassical. The design style was chosen for this federal building because of its meaning. Neoclassicism denotes fashion, taste, a strong political structure, as well as order and balance. Not to mention the symmetry is something that endures architecture of empire and glory. All this communicates a very stable democratic political message to the citizens; where they feel protected by their government.

Abstraction

As we can appreciate, this is a caption of an abstract which points towards a visual message of function. The function that has bean abstracted is work and our interaction with the environment where we perform our work activities. Viewers can relate to this image by simply putting ourselves outside the box and see inside and pass the window. By doing this we can reflect in many things we do and how we perform when doing our work activities. There we can realize and reflect in a things that can make our work easier and less stressful, because when we go back inside that box we want to be able to do things better and less painful and stressful as possible.

Symbolism

The image of the sign above symbolizes immigrants crossing the freeway. This signs is very common in San Diego California, since is one of the cities in the United States that go along the border of Mexico. The sign denotes for drivers to be aware that there is a lot of immigrant activity along that area. The only way for a person to know that would be when driving on interstate 5 in San Diego. This caution sign is very large, really hard to miss along the freeway. The purpose is for drivers to slowdown and be cautious to avoid fatal accidents.